i wish the main character would belive in herself more also i dont like the rabbit guy, mainly because she belives he will solve everything, but also cuz i think he is a con artist. i hope to see her probloms by herself or with the help of her friends. are those two bow girls the ship only attack or something ? they stand in the front of the ship what if its attacked from behind? i am still hopeing to see more ship to ship fights, do all ships just shoot at each others or have smaller ships fly out and attack? if the crew is a bunch of pirates should they not swing out on ropes and attack the other ships crew, do other ships capture other ships? how do this crew get their income ? why are there no guys in the crew ? i think the crew’s ship should have more weapons or ways of avoiding attack love your work please update FASTER !! 🙂
>3> I think i’d be worried to have a captain who couldn’t fight. No wonder she got beat so easy in the beginning.
“The rest will to fall into place”? I think there may be a typo there…
“The smell of resined leather,
The steely iron mask,
As you cut and thrust and parried
At the fencing master’s call.
He taught you all he ever knew
To fear no mortal man
And now you’ll wreak you vengeance
In the screams of evil men.
You’ll die as you lived
In the flash of a blade.”
Reunite them! Now! She deserves it :'(
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